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Post by Water Dragon King on Jan 29, 2010 12:22:22 GMT -5
So....What did you guys think?
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Post by Antonio Wolfe on Feb 4, 2010 15:19:56 GMT -5
Ok, first off I do really enjoy reading RP's from handlers that chose to have an Oriental poser. With that said I'll now critique yours...A suggestion would be to develop a back story and tell us about it. Use other side characters important to you. The only reason is that the first several sections only had commentary. I mean you can have that but try an interview seg instead.
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Post by Water Dragon King on Feb 5, 2010 16:20:08 GMT -5
I was originally going to do that with my second RP, hence the "Baron Winchester Claymore Morningstar XVII" character. However, with the deadline hanging right over my head, the original idea couldn't be done.
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