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[[★] Jason Krow [★]]

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[Antonio Wolfe]

Ok I thought this was PWN but all I could see was you talking about being the WWH Heavyweight champion...newsflash this isn't WWH. I notced that you did the same thing last week. I don't know if you will be able to keep this up by a constant mention of another fed...take note that even ROH where some of its stars are champions in other feds don't allow those stars to mention their titles from other feds. I kind of see PWN in that same mold...just like fans of ROH wouldn't really want to hear about those other feds as it should be here as well.

Now it's a solid RP but a solid RP for WWH and not PWN.

[Nathan Harter]

Me thinks I'm going to lose...

[Jason Skye]

I like the RP. You have a very interesting layout and wonderful dialogue. But I didn't see a big connection between this and your upcoming match with Nathan Harter. Overall, it's a great RP, but just not for the match you're in.